TEWWG Final Essay (revision)
I am extremely proud of my final essay for this semester. The first time I did it I was completely off, I wrote about the plot instead of writing about the author's style. In my revision I focused on the author's tone throughout the story. I received a lot better of a grade on my revision which truly represented my improvement. Things I did to improve are: Better and more elevated vocabulary, steady flow of ideas, a lot of reference to the text, and tying all my thoughts together. I did a successful job of supporting my claim properly and laying out the essay.