TEWWG In Class Essay #2
About 3/4 of the way through the semester I wrote this essay in class. I had a definite amount of time in which I had to finish the essay. I greatly improved since the beginning of the year. Some things I did to enhance my writing were to: Dig deeper into the text and uncover new ideas and connections, elaborate more on my claim, and avoid plot discussion and look at author's style. This essay as opposed to my last was a lot more in-depth and analyzed quoted passages from the book. Some thing I still needed in this essay was that I was still talking about plot when I should have been focusing on author's style.